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读后续写一、高考原题1.（2022年新高考） 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线) through thick evergreen forest. I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong He had worked so hard for this event! I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened. "I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him," he explained uncomfortably. "I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide." I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward. David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that's all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.（2021年新高考）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右。 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2020年新高考）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them. One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy-his name was Bernard—had interested her very much. "I wish you could see him," she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. "He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do" After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking could help him to earn money." said Clara. "His family is suffering so much." "So do I," said Harry. "We really should do something to assist them." For some moments, John said nothing. but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, "I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成)." The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one, "I tell you what we can do, "said John. "You know that big box of com Uncle John sent us Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it."注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、考情分析1、写作标准（1）故事要围绕主要人物展开。（2）详细刻画人物角色及其情感。（3）有效使用连接成分，结构紧凑.（4）运用丰富的词汇、语法结构和修辞使描写生动。（5）第一段和第二段的内容衔接自然，逻辑合理通顺。（6）续写内容与所给短文融洽度高，语言风格保持一致，思想积极向上。2、做题步骤Step1：浏览所给信息，确定大意主题——落点。Step2：梳理已知段落，确定主要情节——重点。Step3：借助段落开头，确定续写内容——突破点。Step4：刻画细节冲突，优美连贯表达——亮点。Step5：做到首尾呼应，结构完整合理——基本点。3、写作误区（1）情节设计要符合生活实际和文章逻辑，避免太过离奇。（2）叙述力求精炼、生动、连贯，对话不要太多，书面化的长句不宜太多。三、变式训练4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Last Friday, I got stuck in the elevator in my apartment building for about 20 minutes. That probably didn't sound so terrible. But I started feeling anxious when I realized the elevator slopped somewhere around the 16th floor. Not only was I all alone in the elevator, hut I had a bit of an overactive imagination. I pressed the elevator alarm button. Nothing happened. I pressed it again; nothing. I tried a button labeled "CALL CANCEL" next to a friendly illustration (图解) of a fireman's hat. Surely that would alert the five closest fire departments. I pictured a team of firefighters pulling me out on a rope from the top of the elevator. But nothing happened. Out of options, I called the front desk on my cell phone. "Hi, I'm in the elevator and it's stuck," I said. "Oh, you're the one who's been calling us from the elevator," the doorman said. "We'll get you out. Just stay put." Five minutes later, the elevator still hadn't moved an inch. That didn't stop me from picturing it free falling to the ground floor. Just then the "CALL CANCEL" button buzzed (嗡嗡响) loudly. Was that some sort of signal for me I pressed the button, hoping it would start a conference call system. Once again, nothing happened. I called the front desk again. "There's a buzzing noise!" I said. "Don't worry," the doorman said. "You're going to be okay. Just sit tight." He sounded calm. "Isn't he too calm Oh, my goodness! I'm going to be stuck in here forever!" I thought. I slowly moved to the back of the elevator, hoping my delicate movements wouldn't cause the elevator car to shake wildly. Time to think about the supplies I had on me. I was wearing a very large winter coat that could act as a sleeping bag. In my handbag there were five oranges, and a bottle of drink. Well, that would get me through to at least the afternoon, but what about after that 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I could just picture the website headline the following morning. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was so frightened, but free! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Yesterday, when I arranged my old things, I found a friendship bracelet with several names on it. Looking at it, all those old memories came flooding back to me. It was when I was a freshman in high school. My only close friend was Sabella, who I had known since kindergarten. Bella is and always will be one of my best friends. But she had other close friends too. However, I didn't. I was on the volleyball team, and on the court I knew exactly who I was and where I was supposed to be. I loved all of my teammates, but when we were sitting together before and after games I would just sit there quietly, totally unsure of myself. So I felt never really fit in. At school, it seemed like the only time anyone talked to me was just to jokingly say, "You are so quiet...Do you ever talk " I wanted to talk; I just couldn't find the words. I never felt like I knew what to say in a big group of people. One Saturday after our game, Bella was supposed to come over and spend the night at my house. We always had a lot of fun together. I wished that I could talk to the other girls in the way I talked to her. But before we left the gym that day, some of the other volleyball girls invited her to go to the movies with them. Since Bella had already made plans with me, they asked if I would like to go to the movies with them too. One of the moms drove us, and we all piled into the back seat of her Suburban—Rhiannon, Destinee, Christine, Sabella and me. I was kind of nervous at first, but once it was just us five, I came out of my shell. For the first time in my life, I really felt like I was a part of the conversation, instead of just sitting there listening. It turned out that I had a lot to say, which even surprised me. All the way there, and all the way back, we talked and laughed.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 That was a night that changed my life and everyone noticed my change. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, I had friends too. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The bus ran along the winding mountain road. Trying not to look at the road, I stared out the large window at the tropical greenery (绿色植物) that covered the mountain. Next to me, my mother was as absorbed by the view as I was. She had won the trip to Costa Rica as an award for her high performance at her job. She had decided to take me with her so that we could have some "girl time" together in a new place, and I couldn't be happier to be in such a beautiful place. Our bus came to a small parking lot surrounded by forest. Our guide had told the tour group that it was a cloud forest we were visiting. People started to rise from their seats and moved toward the door. My mom and I picked up our bags and started down the narrow passage, excited to finally get to go on a hike after the hour-long bus ride. When the entire group had gathered outside, the guide smiled at us. "This is an active volcano we are standing on top of now," he said. "You have the opportunity to explore without a guide. There are two paths you can follow when we get into the woods: the first is a shorter loop (环线) and will take you back here in forty minutes or so; the second will take you a longer way, and you should be back here in an hour and twenty minutes. The longer loop is very steep, but certainly doable. All of you should be back here in two hours, which should give you plenty of time to admire the beautiful wildlife of Costa Rica! Go ahead and get started!" Mom looked at me uncertainly. "I assume you would like to do the longer loop,'' she said after a moment. I nodded. We only had five days here, and I wanted to see as much as I could during that time. Mom finally agreed.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gradually either of us realized the road got steeper and steeper. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a recent Saturday evening at around midnight, my wife and I were just about to turn off the light and go to sleep. Then we heard the sounds of a group of people talking in the street, outside our home. Suddenly came two loud sounds above our bedroom window. It was followed by the noise of laughter and people running away down our street. We both jumped out of bed. I rushed outside unsure of what had caused the two sounds or what damage I could expect to see. The silence of the night was broken by the distant sound of people laughing. At that moment I just wanted to run after them. However, running bare-footed on the road in the dark was not a very wise thing to do. I could hear dripping (滴水的) noises on the driveway and the light above our garage helped me to identify just what had happened. Our home had been the victim of an egg bombing! Being faced with the task of cleaning up this mess was not a pleasing thought. And it was too late to clean up the mess, as it would disturb our neighbors. So it could wait to the morning. Early next morning with a bucket of warm water and a brush in hand, and with a ladder placed on the front wall, I was ready to wash off the 1-meter-long spots above our front bedroom windows. My task was made even more challenging by the two large awnings (遮阳篷) which protected our bedroom windows from the heat of the afternoon sun. My annoyance with the late night trick was again building to the level of the night before. As I climbed the ladder, I noticed that the glass in a small window was very badly cracked. As the awning protected the window, it was clear that the damage had not been caused by the egg bombing. As I carefully placed my hand on the glass, I discovered that the glass was very loose and the window would drop to the driveway, some seven meters below anytime.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just a few meters away, we have a basketball court. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Within 24 hours the cracked window had been replaced. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Spelling was my favorite subject in fourth grade. Every week I memorized the new words, and by Friday I was prepared to lake the spelling test. I usually got all the words right. My teacher, Mrs Casazza, usually wrote "Excellent!" on the top of my paper. One day, Mrs Casazza announced to the class that we would have a spelling bee (拼字比赛) on Thursday. "Oh, no," I thought. Last month when I had to stand in the front of the class and give a book report, my arms shook so badly that it was hard to read my paper. I was very conscious of the twenty-seven pairs of eyes on me and all I wanted to do was to run hack to my seat. A spelling bee would be even worse. I wouldn't have a paper to read from! After lunch on Thursday, Mrs Casazza explained the rules. "Say the word, spell it, and then say it again," she said. Be careful not to repeat any letters." One at a time, she pronounced a word for each student to spell. Two boys made mistakes right away and had to sit down. With sweaty hands, I waited for my turn. After the girl next to me correctly spelled her word, Mrs Casazza called my name and said, "Your word is 'echo'". "Echo," I started. Then my mind went blank. Everyone was looking at me, waiting for me to speak out the first letter. But I couldn't, I think. My face got hot and I was unable to finish the word. Mrs Casazza had to let me sit down. Afterwards, Mrs Casazza said it worked so well that she decided to have a spelling bee every Thursday. Afraid that I'd mess up again, I didn't want to go to school the following Thursday. "What's wrong " my mother asked. I told her about the spelling bee and explained that I was nervous when they were all looking at me. "You're a good speller and you do so well in your tests, so just believe in yourself," Mum said.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The encouragement from Mum gave me much confidence in myself. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "Very good," Mrs Casazza said with a cheerful smile on her face. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案以及解析1.答案： We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me. I quietly said, "David, if you don't want to run today(if引导条件状语从句), no one is going to make you do. But if you're not running because you're afraid someone is going to laugh, that's not a good enough reason. There will always be someone who will laugh and say mean words(who引导定语从句). There are people like that, and that's just the way it is. The real question is whether you are going to let those few people stop you from doing something you really want to do(whether引导表语从句, 里面包含了省略了that的定语从句). Are you going to let them get in your way If you really want to run, David, then you run!" I held my breath as David took this in. Then he looked at the field and said with fierce but quiet determination, "I'm gonna run." I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The starter's gun sounded, and David lurched forward with the other children. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me appeared too. David picked himself up and started again. This was David's run. He had worked for it, and he wouldn't give up! At last, he raised his arms in triumph as he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause. At the end of the year, the track coach asked the class to nominate one of their classmates for the athletic award for their grade. Without hesitation the whole class voted for David, saying that no one had worked harder for that award than he(现在分词短语作伴随状语, 第一个that引导宾语从句).解析：本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了患有脑部疾病的孩子David, 他看起来比同龄人小很多, 而且跑步动作和别人不太一样, 教练担心他被人嘲笑而让他选择是否继续参加比赛, David选择放弃。但是"我"作为学校的特殊教育老师, 决定鼓励他参加比赛。1. 段落续写:①由第一段首句内容"我们坐在一起, 但David不看我。"可知, 第一段可描写"我"与David之间的互动, 以及"我"是如何鼓励David参加跑步的。关键词: give up(放弃); make a good preparation(做好准备), come true(实现)。②由第二段首句内容"我看着David和其他选手一起走上起跑线。"可知, 第二段可描写David在跑步中的表现, 以及周围人对他表现的看法, 以及作者和David的感受。关键词: out of breath(气喘吁吁); stick to(坚持); manage to do(成功做)。2.答案： As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were! The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, "Happy Mother’s Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.3.答案： When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family. With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.4.答案： I could just picture the website headline the following morning. Woman Stuck in an Elevator 19 Hours! Survive on Small Oranges…Suddenly, I heard another elevator car going by and a voice came over my elevator. I shouted loudly, trying to get the attention of the people in the other elevator car, but it didn't help. Soon the noise from the other elevator died away. I felt desperate. Just then, the elevator moved up and opened on the 16th floor. I rushed out. I was so frightened, but free! "Are you okay " the doorman said when he saw me. I nodded, though I was still scared. The doorman explained that the speaker system of the control room wasn't working, so he couldn't answer me. And he apologized for that. "Anyway, you are lucky," he added. "The elevator returned to normal before the firemen arrived." Indeed, it was a wonder, I thought. The incident I had experienced was really frightening but not dangerous.5.答案： That was a night that changed my life and everyone noticed my change. I noticed I said all the time. I even told a few jokes and I was so glad I did it. By the end of the night, one of them turned around and yelled enthusiastically, laughing at something. I said "I don't think I've really ever heard you talk before! You are so fun to be around!" Another girl added, "I can't believe we've never hung out before! I hope we are friends forever." Finally, I had friends too. I felt like I would cry, but I couldn't, because I was too busy laughing, A few weeks later, one of the parents took us to make friendship bracelets. They had a tiny piece of glass with a little piece of rice inside which had all our names printed on it. I haven't seen that bracelet in the past several years. But today, seventeen years later, it reappeared in front of my eyes, reminding me to treasure my friendship.6.答案： We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest. It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes of walking and taking pictures of the beautiful mountainside, we were in a large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano's crater. We managed to move our way to the railing for a good view. So far, the scenery had been wonderful and the road had been mostly flat. My mom and I were both feeling pretty good. I was truly hoping that Mom could feel good enough to go on the longer loop. Gradually either of us realized the road got steeper and steeper. Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. "Maybe we need to take a break," I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep trail. After a lot of stops and starts, we finally reached the parking lot. "The long trail wasn't so bad, eh " the guide asked with a cheerful smile. "You just have to know that keep going when it gets a little tough."7.答案： Just a few meters away, we have a basketball court. On most days of the week there were up to six young people who played in the court. My thoughts immediately turned to what could happen if the broken glass in the window had not discovered for much longer and then suddenly dropped. The likelihood of the young people being seriously injured was extremely high. After quickly washing the egg stains off the window, I got to secure the cracked glass with some heavy-duty masking tape. Within 24 hours the cracked window had been replaced. Over the next few days, I realized that had our home not been hit by those eggs late on that Saturday night, I may not have discovered the broken window before it dropped and came down all over our driveway. This incident reminded me that in most cases there is always another side to everything that happens to us and it can often provide a positive outcome, if not now, then at some time in the future.8.答案： The encouragement from Mum gave me much confidence in myself. Soon the spelling bee was coming again and my word was "piece". "Piece," I started. "P." The strange feeling that everyone was staring at me began to appear again, but I remembered what Mum had said. Taking a deep breath, I had a big smile on my face. My mind cleared and I concentrated. Now did the word start with P-I or P-E I knew this. We'd learned that there is a "pie in "piece". "I-E-C-E," I said. "Piece.""Very good," Mrs Casazza said with a cheerful smile on her face. I did it once, so I knew I could do it again. Throughout the year, I even won a few spelling bees. It worked so well that I had so much fun from the spelling bee and looked forward to it every Thursday. Thanks to my mother, I wasn't afraid of standing in the front of the class. Now, I have more confidence in myself at school, jumping at the chance to give speeches and book reports.

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